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29 November 2007 @ 09:43 pm
Fic: Winner at a Losing Game, ch. 10  
Title: Winner at a Losing Game
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 984
Pairing: Mick/Beth
Disclaimer: If I owned these two...well you'll see. Obviously, I don't.
Author's note: Here it is. The chapter that I have been terrified to write. But I did. Obviously, with the rating, you should be able to figure out what happens. Read at your own risk. Enjoy!

Chapter Ten

Mick and Beth stood outside Beth’s apartment in awkward silence. The last time they were there Beth promised that Mick would stay the night. She, for one, was determined to keep that promise. As she pulled out her keys to open the door, Mick said, “You know that if I come in there, everything is going to change, right?”

“I know that.”

“There’s no going back.”

“Who said anything about going back? I want to go forward. With you. Right now.” And with that, she opened the door and stepped inside. Mick still hesitated, the conflict evident on his face. Beth turned around and gave him her most seductive smile, said, “You coming?” and made her way towards the bedroom.

Still not quite believing this was happening, Mick stepped over the threshold and closed the door behind him. He retraced Beth’s path to the bedroom, like a lion stalking its prey. He found her there silhouetted in the window by the moonlight. He had never seen her look more beautiful. Mick walked over to her and kissed her fiercely. She willingly accepted his onslaught. Mick snaked an arm around her waist to pull her closer. Coming up for air, Beth said, “You have entirely too many clothes on.”

Her hands were at his waist clawing at the hem of his Henley. She slid her hands underneath his shirt and felt the taut abs beneath it. As her hands moved higher, the Henley bunched up around her arms. Each thumbs grazed his nipples, which immediately hardened. Mick shuddered.

“Let me take care of this,” he said as he pulled the shirt over his head. Beth placed feather-light kisses down his torso, driving him crazy. It had been so long since a woman had touched him that way. When she reached his waist, she turned her eyes up towards his, seeking permission. Mick nodded. Beth unhooked his belt, no easy feat considering the large bulge in the front of his pants. Pulling the belt free, Beth unclasped his jeans and pulled down the zipper. She reached up and pushed the jeans down over his hips, revealing a pair of red silk boxers . Beth’s hand stroked the front of Mick’s boxers, eliciting a loud moan of pleasure. Soon the boxers too found their way to the floor.

Beth marveled at the sight before her. Mick, naked, standing in the moonlight. Her own personal Adonis. “You’re perfect,” she whispered. She knelt down in front of him, intent on worshipping at her newfound altar. Beth wrapped her small hand around his cock and began to slowly stroke him. Wrapping her lips around the head, she swirled her tongue around him, causing him to clutch the wall for support. More of his cock disappeared into her mouth as she sucked with increasing pleasure. Mick had never felt anything like it in his eighty-five years. It was heaven. But he also knew that if she kept it up he wasn’t going to last. He gently tugged on her hair with his free hand indicating for her to stop. She released him with a wet plop.

Suddenly Beth, still fully clothed, was being carried to the nearby bed. Mick laid her down and began to slowly undress her. She moved to help him but he swatted her hands away. “Let me,” he said. He was determined to give as good as he got.

Her blouse came off first, revealing vast expanses of alabaster skin. Mick placed a series of kissed along her collarbone as he reached around to unclasp her bra, which also found its way to the floor. He lowered his mouth to her breast, suckling on the already hardened peak. Beth’s hands tangled in his hair as she tried to bring his head closer. Mick turned his attention to the other breast. Meanwhile, he slid his hand down Beth’s stomach to unhook her pants. He pushed her pants down over her hips. When he could reach no farther, he moved down to her feet and finished pulling them off.

Mick knelt at her feet for several long seconds, mesmerized. Beth spread her legs slightly and Mick was struck with the musky scent of her arousal. He placed a kiss on each inner thigh before moving to her core. His fingers spread her labia as his tongue slid across her opening and up to her clit. He plunged his tongue inside her as she wantonly thrust her hips. “Oh my God, Mick. Please,” she moaned.

That was all the encouragement he needed. Mick snaked his way up her body and positioned himself at her entrance. He looked in her eyes, asking without words if she was ready. She nodded. With a grunt, he plunged his cock into her. She was so tight; he wanted to give her a few seconds to adjust to his size. She felt like fire around him; if he didn’t move she’d burn him alive. Slowly he began to withdrawal. Beth locked her legs around his waist, altering the angle of his thrusts. With each thrust Mick lost a little more of his control. His thrusts became harder, faster, more erratic. He could sense Beth’s climax approaching. She began to spasm around him as she called out his name. He continued to thrust through her orgasm to make it last as long as possible. A few more thrusts and he joined her in bliss.

Spent, Mick rolled off her. Needing to feel his skin against hers, Beth laid her head on his chest and listened to his heart return to its normal rhythm. After a few minutes, she said, “Why did we wait to do that again?”

Mick laughed. “We were stupid.”

“Yes, we were.”

“Good to know that we’ll be doing it plenty from now on.”

“I love you, Mick.”

“I love you, too, Beth.”

They drifted off to sleep, safe in each other’s arms.

Epilogue to come...

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Say neversarisynn on November 30th, 2007 04:14 am (UTC)
This was my first reaction: "YAYPORN!!!!!"

I know, I'm totally immature.

“You have entirely too many clothes on.”

I agree. He needs to be less clothed more often.

...a pair of red silk boxers.

GUH. *dies*

Mick, naked, standing in the moonlight.

GUH!!!!

Mental images... too much... need... ice...
michellemtsumichellemtsu on November 30th, 2007 04:34 am (UTC)
*hands you ice*

Feeling better?
Say neversarisynn on November 30th, 2007 04:44 am (UTC)
Oh yes, thank you. Maybe I can leave a coherent review now.

I thought it was lovely. These two were perfectly in character, the writing was lovely. I'm not sure why you were scared but you had no need to be.
michellemtsumichellemtsu on November 30th, 2007 05:02 am (UTC)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
shippercrazed: anima kiss M & Bshippercrazed on November 30th, 2007 04:47 am (UTC)
Yowza! That was HOT! Needed about 10 more chapters just like that one! Yes, I'm greedy when it comes to smut! My only constructive piece of advice (and not because I'm greedy)...would have been to try and spread the love scene out more. You could do this by adding in more details of what she did or he did, but also how each felt as things were being done to them and they were doing to the other (make sense?) You actually did this...you just could have used more of it. It just seemed short to me. Other than that I thought it was great.
michellemtsumichellemtsu on November 30th, 2007 05:04 am (UTC)
Thanks for the criticism. I was thinking the same think when I finished. I think it'll get better the more I write. At least I hope so. I was just so nervous about what I did write that I wanted post it before I chickened out.
Ameerakimerad on November 30th, 2007 04:59 am (UTC)
Just... wow. Very well done. lol there was no need to be scared about this.

it was so sweet and intense. great job with the whole story.

~Z

p.s.- THIS WAS EXTREMELY HOT STUFFFFFFZ! :P
michellemtsumichellemtsu on November 30th, 2007 05:08 am (UTC)
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

lindyrblindyrb on November 30th, 2007 07:05 am (UTC)
Pardon me while a pick my tongue up off the floor and wipe up this big 'ole puddle of drool.

Girl, that was HOT! More, more, more!
michellemtsumichellemtsu on November 30th, 2007 01:15 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it. *hands you a towel*
copswife0819 on November 30th, 2007 01:00 pm (UTC)
Winner At a Losing Game
I've finally had a chance to really sit down and read this story. You've done an excellent and tasteful job! Please continue to write - I am looking forward to more from you.
michellemtsumichellemtsu on November 30th, 2007 01:12 pm (UTC)
Re: Winner At a Losing Game
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
micksvamptrampmicksvamptramp on November 30th, 2007 03:24 pm (UTC)
you're a very naughty girl!!!!
That's why I added you to my friend list!!!!! Seriously Michele, this fanfic was awesome!!!!!! I, on the other hand, should have been smarter and more mature: making the decision to read this at work was really silly!!!!!!!!!

Can you pass that ice over here!?!?!?!?!?!

Thanks for ;your awesome story!
michellemtsumichellemtsu on November 30th, 2007 03:52 pm (UTC)
Re: you're a very naughty girl!!!!
*passes the ice*

Thanks! Yes, naughty is good. But when it comes to Alex/Mick aren't all of us a little naughty!
heartagram_lala: Moonlight - Mick freezerheartagram_lala on January 9th, 2008 06:36 pm (UTC)
*thud*

you killed me, but what a way to go !!!
Michelle: Moonlight never let you go Mick/Bethmrs_boyscout on January 22nd, 2008 06:43 pm (UTC)
I thought this was great for your first smut post! It's soooo hard to write the first time. But I loved it.

I have to ask a dumb question.... do vamps have a heartbeat? I kinda' thought they didn't. But what do I know. lol

But this was very hot!
michellemtsumichellemtsu on January 22nd, 2008 07:44 pm (UTC)
Every other vampire thing I've seen says they don't have a heartbeat, but Moonlight has never told us one way or the other, so I took a leap. I decided that they did, but it was very slow. You know, undead but not dead. But who knows? :)